Janet with her two Kids
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Janet with her Two Kids
"Janet with her Two Kids"
Janet was a single mother of two young girls, Jennifer and Rosemary. She lived with her daughters in a small cottage in a quiet neighborhood, surrounded by dense forests and rolling hills. Despite her financial struggles, Janet was grateful for her home and the peace it offered her family.
However, the peace was about to be shattered. Janet began to notice strange things
happening in the cottage. Doors would slam shut on their own, footsteps could be heard in the halls when no one was there, and strange whispers echoed through the walls. Janet tried to ignore it, thinking it was just her imagination playing tricks on her, but the events only became more frequent and unnerving.
One night, as Janet was tucking her daughters into bed, she noticed Rosemary's eyes widen with fear. "Mommy, there's someone in my closet," the little girl whispered. Janet approached the closet and opened the door, but there was nothing there. However, as she was about to close the door, she noticed a pair of glowing eyes staring back at her from the darkness. She stumbled back in terror, her heart pounding in her chest.
The next day, Janet decided to seek help. She went to the local priest, who listened to her story and offered to perform an exorcism on her home. The ritual was intense, and Janet watched in fear as the priest performed the sacred rite. However, when it was over, the disturbances seemed to have stopped. Janet was relieved and grateful, and she and her daughters were finally able to rest easy.
Or so she thought. A few nights later, Janet was awoken by the sound of her daughters screaming. She ran to their room to find Jennifer and Rosemary huddled in the corner, pointing towards the closet. Janet cautiously approached the closet and, to her horror, saw the same glowing eyes she had seen before. The entity in the closet was a ghost, a vengeful spirit that had been awakened by the exorcism.
Janet knew she had to act fast. She gathered her daughters and fled the cottage, running through the dark forests and rolling hills, her heart pounding with fear. As they ran, they heard the ghostly footsteps echoing behind them, getting closer and closer with each step. Janet pushed her daughters faster, their breaths coming in gasps, until they finally reached the safety of the local church.
There, Janet told the priest what had happened and begged for his help. The priest listened and, after much thought, decided that the only way to save Janet and her daughters was to perform another exorcism, this time on the ghost itself. The ritual was even more intense than the first, and Janet watched in horror as the priest confronted the ghostly entity. However, when it was over, the ghost was gone, and the disturbances in the cottage ceased.
Janet and her daughters were finally able to rest easy, and they never saw the ghostly entity again. They lived in peace for the rest of their days, grateful for the priest's bravery and the protection of the church. But even to this day, there are those who whisper that the ghost still haunts the forests and hills surrounding the cottage, waiting for its next unsuspecting victims.
About the Creator
suman mohan
Since my school days, I've been passionate about reading and writing. Fiction, Poetry, and Fanfiction are my go-to genres for creating stories.I also find joy in crafting movie reviews. My ultimate goal is to become a creative writer.
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Nice story!
Oooh!! That was so creepy and nice job building suspense!! 😁
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