She asked him, 'How much are you. selling the eggs for?

She told him, 'I will take 6 eggs for $1.25 or I will leave.

Man: 'Maybe, this is a good beginning because I have not been able to sell even a single egg today. 

Where is a Humanity? (Critique)

A poor man

She asked him, 'How much are you. selling the eggs for?

Man: '$0.25 an egg, Madam.

She told him, 'I will take 6 eggs for $1.25 or I will leave.



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