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Moby Dick

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By Patrick M. OhanaPublished 3 years ago • 1 min read
Moby Dick
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A disgusting whaler on a whaler cannot accept his defeat to a so-called beast, when the only beast was, is and will always be him and his kind.

More whale meat, please

Over some rye

Before midnight

Yesterday's hunt

Dive in head first

Into its chest

Cannot do it

Katastrophe

Essay

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Patrick M. Ohana

A medical writer who reads and writes fiction and some nonfiction, although the latter may appear at times like the former. Most of my pieces (over 2,200) are or will be available on Shakespeare's Shoes.

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    Written by Patrick M. Ohana