Michelangelo's David - The veil between us.
A quick critique of the sculpture
When looking up at him, as one must towards the famous sculpture, I wondered as I gazed upon his details, such as delicate veins and toned muscle and thoughtful texture, whether the real man or entity resides inside, watching me looking up—an experience of a transaction between mortality and immortality.
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K. Kocheryan
I write, delete, write, and on most days, delete again.
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