Fourth Wing (Special Edition) (The Empyrean, 1)
A book review.
While I could not predict every detail in the plot twists, I certainly could predict in general what would happen with a very high frequency. For example, I knew right away what *kind* of secrets Xaden was keeping as soon as the fact that he was keeping those secrets was mentioned and I was right, however of course the specifics of the secret I did not know and no, I cannot say more without a spoiler.
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Very creative and powerful