Back to the Future
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Journeying to 1955 in a Time Machine to save Doc’s life, Marty meets his own mother who swoons at the perfect man who is half her, half her future love.
Space time continuum wrecked!
Have to put it right before he fades from existence. Challenges and Adventure.
Saved by lightning ⚡️
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Marty McFly! God I love this movie!