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50 Shades of Grey by E. L James

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By Jazzy Published 3 years ago • 1 min read
Yes, I read it.

It's a fan fix based on Edward Cullen, with more sex. Discussing the kind of sex you want is liberating; the sex scenes suck. How many words can you use for a penis? The answer is a lot. However, the overuse of masculine toxicity as a plot device is disheartening

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