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The Wrong Flame

Chapter 3

By Elisa WontorcikPublished 5 months ago • 2 min read
The Wrong Flame
Photo by Patrick Hendry on Unsplash

The red lantern didn’t flicker like a flame.

It pulsed — slow, steady, like a heartbeat.

Mara stepped closer, each footfall sinking deeper than it should, as if the soil wanted to swallow her ankles. The air thickened again, syrupy and metallic, coating her tongue with the taste of rust.

She stopped an arm’s length away.

The lantern wasn’t hanging from a branch.

It wasn’t resting on the ground.

It was suspended in midair, held up by nothing at all.

Mara’s breath hitched. “What are you?”

The lantern answered with a soft, wet sound — a single drop of red falling from its base and splattering onto the soil. The ground hissed where it landed.

Then the lantern’s flame stretched upward, elongating like a spine cracking into place.

And a voice — her brother’s voice — whispered from inside it:

“Mara… don’t look away.”

She didn’t.

She couldn’t.

The flame twisted, reshaping itself into a silhouette. A small one. A child-sized one. A boy with no features except two hollow pits where eyes should be.

Her brother’s outline.

But not her brother.

The figure stepped out of the lantern, dragging a long shadow behind it that didn’t match its shape. The shadow was taller, broader, wrong in every direction.

“Mara,” the figure said again, voice trembling like a broken violin string. “You took too long.”

Her throat tightened. “Where are you? Where’s my real brother?”

The figure tilted its head. “He’s here.”

The ground behind it bulged.

Split.

Opened.

A shape rose from the soil — not a hand this time, but a face. Her brother’s face. Eyes closed. Lips parted as if dreaming.

Mara lunged forward — but the shadow moved faster.

It stretched across the clearing, slamming into her chest like a cold wave. She staggered back, gasping as the air was knocked from her lungs.

The child-shaped figure stepped closer.

“He’s not dead,” it said. “Not yet.”

Mara’s heart hammered. “What do you want?”

The figure’s hollow eyes glowed faintly red.

“A trade.”

The forest groaned in approval.

Mara tightened her grip on the blue lantern. Its flame flared, brighter than before, casting sharp light across the clearing. The shadow recoiled, sizzling at the edges.

The child-figure hissed.

“That lantern doesn’t belong to you.”

Mara lifted it higher. “It’s mine now.”

The forest shuddered — a ripple of displeasure.

The figure’s voice dropped to a whisper. “Then you’ve already begun the exchange.”

Mara froze.

“What exchange?”

The figure smiled — a thin, splitting crack across its face.

“You carry the lantern.

The lantern carries you.”

The blue flame surged violently, licking the glass from the inside.

Mara felt something shift in her chest — a tug, subtle but unmistakable, like a thread pulling taut.

The forest leaned closer.

The shadow spread wider.

Her brother’s face sank slowly back into the soil.

And the child-shaped figure whispered:

“Choose quickly, Mara.

The Briarwood doesn’t wait.”

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Elisa Wontorcik

Artist, writer, and ritual-maker reclaiming voice through chaos and creation. Founder of Embrace the Chaos Creations, I craft prose, collage, and testimony that honor survivors, motherhood, and mythic renewal.

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    Written by Elisa Wontorcik