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THE DERELICT TITAN

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By edy wangPublished 4 months ago • 4 min read

Salt. Ice. Choking.

Linus Vance didn’t wake up; he was whipped back into the world by a solid wall of freezing black water slamming into his skull. He coughed—a raw, hacking spasm that felt like razor blades scraping his lining. He spat out gray, bitter brine.

Everything was doubled. The rain wasn’t falling; it was a horizontal sheet tearing through the dark. Underneath him, the ocean wasn't just wavy—it was a boiling pot of black pitch. The gale howled, snapping every thread of life it could reach. Linus white-knuckle gripped a shred of nylon rope. The inflatable raft beneath his boots was deflating by the second, ready to split wide open.

"Engineer Vance! Lin! It’s gone... the Ark is fucking gone!"

A shriek cut through the storm. Garrett Hayes. His graduate student—a twenty-something kid who used to study marine ecosystems in a quiet lab, now looking like a ghost. Garrett had used a broken life jacket to tie himself down to the floorboards. His skin was the color of parchment.

Linus didn't say a damn thing. He couldn't. He forced his brain into a cold, metallic focus. Thirty minutes ago, the third supercyclone since the Great Rise hit them. Ten minutes after that, their research ship snapped like a dry twig. In a world with nothing but water, going overboard meant you were dead before you hit the bottom.

Three more on the raft. Fates unknown. Ray "Mac" MacInnis, the old Navy mechanic, was face-down on the opposite tube, dark blood mixing with rain on his scalp. Sasha Cross, their logistics officer, had her arms locked around a sealed, waterproof medical crate. And crammed into the farthest corner, shaking so hard his teeth rattled, was fifteen-year-old Jonah—the son of a scientist who had vanished weeks ago.

"Shut up! Breathe less!" Linus spat, wiping rain from his stinging eyes. His throat felt like sandpaper.

He tried to read the swells, to get a bearing, but the dark was absolute. The geomagnetic storm had fried the raft’s auto-navigation twenty minutes ago. They were a dead leaf spinning down a massive toilet bowl.

Then came the flash. A jagged streak of lightning tore the sky open.

"What the hell is that?!" Garrett screamed.

In that single, electric second, a shadow—massive, terrifying, impossible—loomed out of the black horizon.

Not an island. Not a ship.

A gargantuan offshore monster, held above the abyss by columns of blackened steel. It stood there, completely numb to the tempest, letting thirty-foot swells explode against its exposed lattice girders. It looked like a leviathan sleeping in the deep. Cold. Alone. Unmovable.

"It’s Poseidon 5... the old deep-sea rig," Linus muttered. His pupils dilated. As a marine engineer, he knew the corpse when he saw it. Decades back, when the deep wells went dry and the oceans swallowed the coast, these steel islands were abandoned by the energy conglomerates. Left to rust in international dead zones.

"Row!" Linus roared over the wind. "Paddle, you bastards! It’s our only shot!"

Mac stirred. The old Navy blood kicked in. He slapped Garrett hard across the face to break the shock, ripped two broken pieces of fiberglass deck plating from somewhere, and started digging into the violent water like a lunatic.

The raft rode the crests like a pinball. The sea kept throwing them into the shadow of that steel monolith, then sucking them back toward the abyssal mouth of the deep.

CRASH.

A heavy, shuddering iron impact. The raft slammed into the Level-D mooring guide at the very base of the structure. Rusted steel teeth bit into the rubber. The pontoons hissed, drowning fast.

"Go! Up! Grab the ladder!" Mac’s eyes were bloodshot. He hauled Jonah up by his collar, waited for a massive swell to lift the raft, and threw the kid onto a near-vertical alloy ladder.

Linus went next. Then Sasha. Then Garrett. Mac was the last man out.

The second Linus’s torn, bleeding palms locked onto the freezing metal rungs, a sickening POP echoed below. The split raft was instantly swallowed, sucked down into the five-hundred-meter darkness by a brutal undertow.

Five of them. Clinging to iron rungs like geckos pinned by a Category 12 gale.

Below their boots, the sea roared. Above them, thirty meters of dead steel fortress disappeared into the blind fury of the storm.

Linus gritted his teeth, fighting the wind that tried to peel him off the ladder. One rung. Then another. With every foot he gained, his mind was calculating: Abandoned for ten years. No grid. No fresh water. No food. Just five people and a medical box they hadn't even opened.

When Linus finally threw his body over the outer safety railing, dropping onto the icy steel deck, his muscles quit. The rain hammered his back, making a relentless, metallic racket against the iron.

"Did we... did we make it?" Garrett whispered nearby, staring at the tangled maze of conduits, the massive derrick, and the yawning, pitch-black hatches. He sounded lost.

Linus dragged himself up, squinting into the black void of the Pacific. No land. No rescue boats. No lights.

He turned toward the dead world of iron and bolts. His eyes were as dark as a deep-sea current.

"No," Linus said softly. "The survival game just started. Welcome to our Mysterious Island."

Deep in the guts of the rig—on the lowest deck of a structure that was supposed to be completely dead—an emergency red light buried behind a cluster of pipes suddenly did something impossible.

It blinked. Just once. Silent. Ominous.

Adventure

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    Written by edy wang