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The Creekbed Witness

Chapters 13-22

By Elisa WontorcikPublished 3 months ago • 7 min read
The Creekbed Witness
Photo by HARALD PLIESSNIG on Unsplash

Chapter Thirteen — The Order

Calder Boone’s porch felt like a place the fog wanted to claim.

Detective Mara Ellery stood beneath the flickering porch light, the strip of bark hanging from the railing swaying gently in the damp air. The symbol carved into it — circle, three lines — looked deeper than the others she’d seen. More deliberate. More personal.

And beneath it:

BOONE.

Calder hovered behind her, arms crossed tight, jaw clenched. “I didn’t hear him come up. Didn’t see him leave.”

“You heard something,” Mara said.

Calder swallowed. “Movement near the creek. Heavy. Slow.”

“Dragging?”

“Maybe.”

The woods creaked. A branch snapped somewhere beyond the treeline.

Rowan Pike stepped closer. “We need to sweep the area.”

“No,” Mara said. “He’s not here.”

Tessa Holt pointed toward the trees. “He was.”

The fog shifted — a ripple, a suggestion of shape.

A figure flickered between the pines.

Tall.

Hooded.

Still.

The hooded man.

He lifted his hand.

Something glinted between his fingers.

A small metal tag.

Calder’s breath hitched. “That’s my wife’s. She lost it years ago.”

The hooded man dropped it.

It hit the ground with a soft metallic click.

Then he pointed toward the creek.

He stepped backward into the fog.

Gone.

Mara picked up the tag.

Cold.

Wet.

Marked.

A symbol had been carved into the metal.

Circle.

Three lines.

And beneath it:

FIRST.

Rowan’s voice cracked. “First what?”

Mara stared into the fog.

“First witness.”

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Chapter Fourteen — The Second Mark

The fog thickened as they drove back toward the ranger station. The headlights barely cut through it, turning the road into a narrow tunnel of gray. Mara sat in the passenger seat, the metal tag cold in her hand.

Rowan glanced at her. “He’s building something.”

“An order,” Mara said.

“Of what?”

“People connected to the creek.”

Tessa leaned forward from the back seat. “Calder was first.”

“And I’m second,” Mara said.

Rowan’s grip tightened on the wheel. “Ellery—”

“He marked me before he marked Calder.”

The station came into view, its porch light flickering through the fog. Something hung from the railing.

Another strip of bark.

Mara stepped out of the cruiser, heart pounding. She approached the porch slowly, boots sinking into damp earth.

The bark swayed gently.

Circle.

Three lines.

And beneath it:

HOLT.

Tessa gasped. “No.”

Rowan cursed. “He’s marking all of us.”

Mara touched the bark. The wood was cold, damp, freshly cut.

“He’s not marking victims,” she said quietly. “He’s marking witnesses.”

Tessa swallowed. “Witnesses to what?”

Mara looked toward the woods.

“The creek.”

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Chapter Fifteen — The Bend at Night

They headed into the woods again, this time with the fog thicker than ever. The creek murmured somewhere ahead, louder than usual, swollen from recent rain. Mara moved slowly, flashlight cutting through the gray.

They reached the bend.

The symbol carved into the tree looked different now — deeper, sharper, almost glowing in the fog.

Rowan crouched beside it. “He came back.”

Tessa pointed to the ground. “Footprints.”

Fresh.

Deep.

Leading toward the water.

Mara followed them to the creek’s edge. The water pushed against the bank, restless and loud.

Something floated near the roots.

A piece of fabric.

Mara reached down, pulled it free.

A sleeve.

Dark green.

Ranger uniform material.

Tessa’s breath hitched. “That’s mine.”

Rowan stepped back. “He’s escalating.”

Mara studied the sleeve. A symbol had been drawn on the fabric.

Circle.

Three lines.

And beneath it:

SECOND.

Tessa whispered, “I’m second?”

“No,” Mara said quietly. “I am.”

The woods creaked.

A splash echoed upstream.

Heavy.

Deliberate.

Mara turned. “Move.”

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Chapter Sixteen — The Dragging Sound

They ran along the creek, boots pounding through mud and brush. The fog swallowed their shapes, turning them into shadows. The creek roared beside them, louder with every step.

Another splash.

Closer.

Rowan drew his weapon. “He’s in the water.”

Tessa pointed. “There!”

A shape moved through the fog — slow, heavy, dragging something behind it. Mara sprinted, heart pounding, breath sharp.

“Stop!” she shouted.

The shape didn’t stop.

It reached the bank, pulling something large and dark from the water. Mara closed the distance, reaching out—

Her hand brushed fabric.

Cold.

Wet.

Heavy.

The shape twisted away, slipping through her grip like smoke.

Gone.

But the dragged object remained.

Mara approached slowly.

It wasn’t a body.

It was a bag — waterproof, military‑grade, sealed tight.

She knelt, hands trembling, and unzipped it.

Inside:

Survey equipment.

Maps.

A second notebook.

And a single strip of bark.

Circle.

Three lines.

And beneath it:

THIRD.

Rowan whispered, “Who’s third?”

Mara didn’t answer.

Because she already knew.

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Chapter Seventeen — The Third Witness

The ranger station felt smaller than ever.

Mara spread the maps across the table. Each one marked with erosion points, water depth readings, and hand‑drawn symbols. The hooded man had been mapping the creek long before the victim.

Rowan paced. “He’s been planning this.”

Tessa hovered near the window. “Why us?”

Mara pointed to the maps. “Because we’re connected to the creek.”

Rowan frowned. “Calder fishes here. Holt works here. You investigate here.”

“And you,” Mara said quietly, “grew up here.”

Rowan froze.

Tessa whispered, “He marked you too.”

Rowan stepped back. “No. No, he didn’t.”

Mara reached into the bag and pulled out a strip of bark.

Circle.

Three lines.

And beneath it:

PIKE.

Rowan’s breath caught. “No.”

“You’re third,” Mara said.

The woods creaked outside.

A knock hit the door.

Soft.

Slow.

Deliberate.

Rowan raised his weapon. Tessa flinched. Mara moved to the door, pulse hammering.

She opened it.

No one stood outside.

Just fog.

And something lying on the porch.

A footprint.

Deep.

Clear.

Facing the door.

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Chapter Eighteen — The Stump at Dawn

They returned to the clearing at dawn.

Fog clung to the ground, thick and unmoving. The stump sat in the center, its surface carved with dozens of symbols. Circle. Three lines. Again and again.

But something new had been added.

A fourth carving.

Deep.

Sharp.

Fresh.

A name:

ELLERY.

Rowan whispered, “He’s marking you again.”

Tessa swallowed. “Why?”

Mara stepped closer. The carving looked different — deeper than the others, almost gouged. The knife marks were uneven, frantic.

“He wasn’t calm when he carved this,” Mara said.

Rowan frowned. “What does that mean?”

Mara touched the carving.

“He’s losing control.”

The woods creaked.

A branch snapped.

Something moved behind the stump.

Mara turned.

The hooded man stepped out of the fog.

Closer than ever.

Still silent.

Still watching.

He lifted his hand.

Something glinted between his fingers.

A key.

He dropped it.

Then stepped backward into the fog.

Gone.

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Chapter Nineteen — The Key

The key was old, rusted, heavy.

Mara held it in her palm, feeling its weight. Tessa hovered beside her, breath shallow. Rowan paced, muttering under his breath.

“What does it open?” Tessa asked.

Mara studied the key. “Something metal. Something old.”

Rowan pointed to the maps. “He marked the old pump house.”

Mara nodded. “That’s where we’re going.”

They headed toward the pump house, fog thickening with every step. The building sat half‑collapsed beside the creek, its roof sagging, its door rusted shut.

Mara inserted the key.

It turned easily.

The door creaked open.

Inside, the air smelled of mold and wet stone. The floor was covered in debris — broken boards, rusted pipes, old tools.

And in the center of the room:

A box.

Metal.

Locked.

Marked with the symbol.

Circle.

Three lines.

Mara knelt and opened it.

Inside:

The missing notebook page.

And a photograph.

A photograph of the victim.

Standing beside the hooded man.

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Chapter Twenty — The Photograph

The photograph was old — edges curled, colors faded. The victim stood beside the hooded man, both of them younger, both of them smiling.

Rowan whispered, “They knew each other.”

Tessa swallowed. “He wasn’t stalking a stranger.”

Mara studied the photograph. The hooded man’s face was visible — younger, unmasked, eyes sharp and familiar.

Too familiar.

Rowan stepped closer. “Ellery… do you know him?”

Mara didn’t answer.

Because she did.

The woods creaked outside.

A soft thud echoed against the pump house wall.

Tessa flinched. “He’s here.”

Mara pocketed the photograph. “We’re leaving.”

They stepped outside.

Fog swallowed them instantly.

A figure stood at the edge of the creek.

Tall.

Hooded.

Still.

He lifted his hand.

Something dangled from his fingers.

A strip of bark.

He dropped it.

It landed at Mara’s feet.

Circle.

Three lines.

And beneath it:

LAST.

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Chapter Twenty‑One — The Last Witness

The ranger station felt colder than ever.

Mara spread the photograph across the table. Rowan stared at it, jaw tight. Tessa hovered near the window, watching the fog press against the glass.

“He knew the victim,” Rowan said.

“He knew all of us,” Mara replied.

Tessa swallowed. “Why mark us?”

Mara pointed to the maps. “Because we’re connected to the creek. And the creek is connected to him.”

Rowan frowned. “How?”

Mara looked at the photograph.

“He grew up here.”

The woods creaked outside.

A soft scraping sound echoed along the porch.

Mara moved to the door.

Opened it.

A strip of bark lay on the porch.

Circle.

Three lines.

And beneath it:

ELLERY.

Again.

Rowan whispered, “He’s choosing you.”

“No,” Mara said quietly. “He’s warning me.”

Tessa stepped closer. “Warning you of what?”

Mara looked toward the woods.

“The end.”

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Chapter Twenty‑Two — The Creekbed Witness

Night fell fast over Miller Creek.

Fog rolled in thick and low, swallowing the treeline, flattening sound. Mara walked toward the creek alone, flashlight cutting through the gray. The photograph felt heavy in her pocket.

She reached the bend.

The symbol carved into the tree glowed faintly in the fog.

A figure stepped out of the woods.

Tall.

Hooded.

Still.

The hooded man.

Mara didn’t reach for her weapon.

She stepped closer.

He lifted his hand.

Removed the hood.

His face was older now — lined, weathered, eyes sharp and familiar.

“Mara,” he said softly.

Her breath caught. “You.”

He nodded. “You were always the last witness.”

The creek roared behind them.

Fog swallowed the world.

And the woods finally told their story.

Mystery

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Elisa Wontorcik

Artist, writer, and ritual-maker reclaiming voice through chaos and creation. Founder of Embrace the Chaos Creations, I craft prose, collage, and testimony that honor survivors, motherhood, and mythic renewal.

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