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The Creekbed Witness

Chapters 1-5

By Elisa WontorcikPublished 3 months ago • 5 min read
The Creekbed Witness
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Chapter One — The Creekbed Witness

Miller Creek woke before the town did.

Fog lay thick across the water, not drifting but resting, as if it had settled in for the long haul. The treeline was only a suggestion of darker gray against lighter gray. The air smelled of wet earth and something metallic beneath it — a scent Calder Boone couldn’t place but didn’t like.

He stepped into the shallows, boots sinking into the soft mud. The creek murmured around him, slow and steady, pushing against his ankles like a living thing. He cast his line once, twice, watching the ripples disappear into the fog.

Something felt wrong.

Not loud wrong.

Not obvious wrong.

Just… off.

The birds weren’t singing.

The wind wasn’t moving.

Even the creek seemed to hold its breath between murmurs.

A faint sound brushed the edge of his hearing — a soft, irregular tapping. Not water. Not wind. Something else. Something close.

He turned.

At first, he thought it was a branch caught in the current. A pale shape rising and falling with the water’s slow push. But the shape didn’t move like wood. It didn’t turn or drift. It stayed anchored, half‑submerged, caught in the roots beneath the bank.

Calder squinted.

The shape had fingers.

His breath hitched. He stumbled backward, boots slipping on slick stones. The fog shifted just enough to reveal the rest of the body — a man, tangled in the roots, face turned upward, eyes open and reflecting the gray sky.

Calder didn’t scream. He hadn’t screamed since the accident that took his wife twenty years ago. Instead, he whispered a single word into the fog.

“Damn.”

He backed out of the creek, boots dragging, heart pounding. His hands shook as he fumbled for his phone. The screen blurred. He dialed the sheriff’s office, muttering to himself as the call rang.

“It’s happening again,” he said. “The woods ain’t done.”

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Chapter Two — The First Witness

Detective Mara Ellery arrived twenty‑three minutes later.

Her cruiser’s headlights cut through the fog in two pale beams, barely illuminating the gravel pull‑off beside the creek. She stepped out, tugging her coat tighter against the cold. The air smelled wrong — not just of wet earth, but of something older, something unsettled.

Calder Boone stood near the bank, arms crossed, face pale.

“You’re sure you didn’t touch anything?” Mara asked.

He shook his head. “Didn’t have to. The creek did all the touching.”

Mara moved toward the water, careful, deliberate. The body lay where Calder had described — caught in the roots like the creek had tried to hide it and failed. She crouched, studying the angle of the limbs, the bruising along the temple, the way the current nudged the body as if urging it downstream.

Blunt force trauma.

Staged placement.

Recent death.

But something else caught her eye.

A footprint in the mud. Deep. Clear. Leading toward the creek.

No matching print leading away.

Mara straightened slowly. The fog pressed close, thick enough to feel on her skin.

“Calder,” she said quietly, “you didn’t see anyone else out here?”

“No,” he said. “But I heard something. Before I found him.”

“What kind of something?”

Calder swallowed. “A splash. And then… a thud. Like someone dropped something heavy.”

Mara looked back at the body.

Not dropped.

Dragged.

The creek shifted again, revealing a flash of something caught upstream — a corner of waterproof material, wedged between stones.

She stepped toward it, boots sinking into the mud. Reached down. Pulled free a waterproof notebook, its cover scratched, pages warped from the water.

One page was missing.

Her stomach tightened.

This wasn’t just a body.

This was a message.

And someone had made sure she’d find it.

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Chapter Three — The Missing Page

The ranger station sat tucked between pines, its porch light glowing faintly through the fog. Tessa Holt stood outside, arms crossed, watching Mara approach like she’d been expecting her.

“You found something,” Tessa said.

Mara held up the notebook. “Missing a page.”

Tessa’s jaw tightened. “Someone took it.”

“Someone who wanted us to know they took it.”

Inside, the cabin smelled of pine and damp wool. Rowan Pike leaned against the wall, sipping burnt coffee from a chipped mug.

“Calder’s shaken,” Rowan said. “He’s not lying.”

“He’s not telling everything either,” Mara replied.

Rowan smirked. “He never does.”

Tessa stepped closer. “The creek’s been off all week. Animals avoiding it. Water levels shifting. Something’s wrong out there.”

Mara opened the notebook. The remaining pages were filled with survey notes — erosion markers, water depth readings, tree root patterns. The victim had been mapping the creek.

“Why map this stretch?” Rowan asked.

Tessa pointed to a circled note. “That’s the bend where the bank’s been collapsing. People keep pushing into protected land. Someone’s angry about it.”

Mara closed the notebook. “Angry enough to kill?”

Tessa didn’t answer.

The fog pressed against the windows, thick and unmoving.

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Chapter Four — The Symbol

They reached the bend just after dusk.

Fog rolled in early, thick and low, crawling across the creek like something alive. Mara’s boots sank into soft earth as she approached the bank. Rowan followed, flashlight cutting through the gray. Tessa moved ahead, scanning the brush.

“Over here,” she called.

A tree trunk leaned at an angle, roots exposed from erosion. Something had been carved into the bark — fresh, sharp, deliberate.

A small circle.

Three short lines.

Rowan frowned. “What the hell is that?”

Tessa swallowed. “I’ve seen it before.”

Mara turned. “Where?”

Tessa pointed deeper into the woods. “Near the old stump. Weeks ago. I thought it was kids messing around.”

“It’s not kids,” Mara said.

The symbol felt wrong.

Not decorative.

Not random.

Purposeful.

The creek murmured louder, pushing against the bank.

Rowan stepped back. “We should call this in.”

“No,” Mara said. “Not yet.”

“Ellery—”

“This symbol is connected to the missing page. And the body. And Calder’s footprint.”

Rowan stared at her. “You think someone’s marking territory.”

Mara didn’t respond.

Because she didn’t think it.

She knew it.

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Chapter Five — The Hooded Man

The fog thickened as night settled over Miller Creek.

Mara stood at the bend, staring at the symbol carved into the tree. Rowan paced behind her. Tessa scanned the woods, tense and alert.

A sound broke the silence.

A splash.

Upstream.

Heavy.

Mara spun. “Move.”

They ran along the creek, boots pounding through mud and brush. The fog swallowed their shapes, turning them into shadows. The creek roared beside them, louder with every step.

Another splash.

Closer.

Rowan drew his weapon. “He’s in the water.”

Tessa pointed. “There!”

A figure moved through the fog — fast, low, slipping between trees like smoke. Mara sprinted, heart pounding, breath sharp.

“Stop!” she shouted.

The figure didn’t stop.

He darted across the creekbank, boots sliding, coat whipping behind him. Mara closed the distance, reaching out—

Her hand brushed his sleeve.

Cold fabric.

Wet.

Real.

He twisted away, slipping through her grip like water.

Rowan lunged, but the man ducked under a branch and vanished into the fog.

Gone.

Again.

Mara stopped, chest heaving.

“He’s not running,” she said quietly.

Rowan frowned. “What do you mean?”

“He’s leading.”

Tessa swallowed. “Leading where?”

Mara looked upstream, where the fog thickened into a solid wall.

“Into the woods,” she said. “Into his territory.”

Mystery

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Elisa Wontorcik

Artist, writer, and ritual-maker reclaiming voice through chaos and creation. Founder of Embrace the Chaos Creations, I craft prose, collage, and testimony that honor survivors, motherhood, and mythic renewal.

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    Written by Elisa Wontorcik