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Takes more than it gives.

Chapter 6

By Elisa WontorcikPublished 5 months ago • 2 min read
Takes more than it gives.
Photo by Liam Arning on Unsplash

The forest roared.

Not with sound — with pressure.

A crushing weight slammed into Mara’s chest, forcing her to her knees. The blue flame inside her heart spasmed, flickering wildly like a candle in a hurricane.

The child-shaped figure staggered backward, its shadow peeling off the ground like torn skin.

“This was not your place to speak,” it hissed.

Beneath the soil, Elias’s voice rose again — hoarse, desperate:

“Mara, don’t say the vow! It’s not a binding — it’s a burial!”

The ground convulsed.

Elias’s face surfaced fully now — eyes open, wild with terror. His mouth moved, but the soil clung to his lips, muffling his words.

Mara crawled toward him, fighting the cold that wrapped her spine like barbed wire.

“Elias! I’m here!”

The soil tightened around him, dragging him down an inch.

The forest whispered:

One rises.

One sinks.

Balance must be kept.

Mara slammed her hand into the dirt beside him. “Take me instead!”

The Briarwood paused — a long, shivering silence.

The child-figure’s head snapped toward her, its hollow eyes burning red.

“You still don’t understand,” it said. “The lantern doesn’t want your life.”

The blue flame inside her chest surged, burning cold.

“It wants your shape.”

Mara froze.

“What?”

The figure stepped closer, its shadow stretching toward her like a hungry tongue.

“The Briarwood doesn’t keep bodies. It keeps roles. It keeps functions. It keeps… lantern-bearers.”

The cold inside her chest twisted, reshaping itself.

Her fingers stiffened.

Her breath thinned.

Her heartbeat slowed.

The figure smiled.

“You are becoming what the last bearer was. What your brother was meant to be.”

Mara’s vision blurred.

“No,” she whispered. “No, he’s just a boy—”

“He was chosen,” the figure said. “But he ran. And the forest does not forgive a broken role.”

The soil swallowed Elias’s chin.

He screamed through the dirt.

Mara lunged forward — but her legs didn’t move.

She looked down.

Her feet were no longer feet.

They were roots.

Thin, pale, branching roots burrowing into the soil.

“No—no, no, no—”

The blue flame inside her pulsed again, and her bones creaked like wood drying in the sun.

The child-figure leaned close, its voice soft and cruel:

“You offered yourself. The forest accepted. You are not dying, Mara. You are changing.”

The trees bent inward, their branches trembling with anticipation.

Elias’s voice broke through the soil:

“MARA, FIGHT IT!”

She tried.

She tried to pull her legs free, but the roots only dug deeper. Her skin cracked along her arms, glowing faintly blue beneath the surface like veins of light.

The lantern in her hand fused to her palm.

The flame inside her chest beat like a second heart.

The forest whispered:

One lantern enters.

One lantern becomes.

One lantern must stay.

Mara lifted her head, eyes burning with cold fire.

“Then I’ll burn my way out.”

The blue flame exploded.

The clearing lit up like lightning.

The child-figure shrieked, its shadow tearing apart.

The trees recoiled.

The soil split open beneath Elias.

And the Briarwood screamed.

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Elisa Wontorcik

Artist, writer, and ritual-maker reclaiming voice through chaos and creation. Founder of Embrace the Chaos Creations, I craft prose, collage, and testimony that honor survivors, motherhood, and mythic renewal.

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    Written by Elisa Wontorcik