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Red Silence

chapter 3

By Forest GreenPublished 18 days ago • 3 min read
Red Silence
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"Go," Max commanded. "Now. I can't fix the relay if I'm worried about you getting snatched by a ventilation shaft."

Ralph hesitated for a heartbeat, his eyes darting from the tablet to the yawning blackness of the sub-level hatch. He nodded once, a sharp, jerky motion, and retreated toward the residential wing without another word. The silence that followed his departure was heavy, broken only by the distant, rhythmic thrum of the colony’s failing heart.

Max didn't waste time. He slid into the hatch, descending a narrow spiral staircase that smelled of ozone and stagnant coolant. As he moved deeper, the red emergency lighting gave way to an oppressive, suffocating dark. He switched on his shoulder-mounted floodlight, the beam cutting a harsh white path through a haze of floating dust. The walls here were thick, reinforced conduits, but as he descended, he noticed the frost Ralph had mentioned. It wasn't just on the walls; it was webbing across the ceiling in intricate, geometric patterns that looked almost like circuitry etched in ice.

He reached the relay platform—a floating island of machinery surrounded by a deep, humming pit of power cells. The relay was a towering pillar of brass and silicon, now sparking violently. Max moved with a predatory focus, his boots barely making a sound on the grating. He reached for the manual override lever, but as he did, he felt a shift in the air. A sudden, localized drop in temperature turned his breath into a cloud of mist.

Then came the sound: a dry, metallic skittering, like a thousand needles dancing on a sheet of tin. It was coming from the ventilation shaft directly above the relay.

Max didn’t look up immediately. Instead, he shifted his weight, planting his lead foot firmly and sliding his hand toward the combat knife sheathed at his thigh. He had spent three years in the silence of Mars, but his nervous system still functioned on the clock of a super soldier. He didn’t wait for the creature to reveal itself; he timed the rhythm of the skittering, counting the milliseconds between the echoes reflecting off the conduit walls.

The thing dropped.

It wasn't a beast of flesh and bone, but a nightmare of geometry and chrome. It resembled a spindly, multi-jointed arachnid forged from iridescent obsidian, its limbs ending in needles that could pierce reinforced plating. It slammed into the grating beside him with a force that buckled the steel, the impact sending a shockwave through Max's boots.

Max pivoted, his movement a blur of kinetic energy. He didn't use a gun—the risk of a spark in a room filled with leaking coolant and high-voltage relays was too high. He stepped into the creature's reach, using his momentum to drive a heavy, reinforced shoulder into the thing's central mass. The impact sounded like a sledgehammer hitting a car door. The creature was thrown backward, its legs scrabbling for purchase on the slick metal floor, emitting a high-frequency screech that vibrated in Max's teeth.

Max didn't give the entity a chance to recover. He lunged forward, the combat knife whistling through the chilled air. He didn't aim for the limbs; he went for the central junction where the iridescent plates converged. The blade sunk into a gap in the obsidian armor with a sickening, metallic shriek, meeting a resistance that felt like cutting through tempered glass. The creature reacted with a violent spasm, its needle-like legs slashing out in a radial blur. Max twisted his body, a reflexive corkscrew maneuver, feeling the razor-sharp tips graze his tactical suit. The fabric hissed, two thin lines of crimson appearing on his forearm, but he didn't flinch.

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Forest Green

Hi. I am a writer with some years of experiences, although I am still working out the progress in my work. I make different types of stories that I hope many will enjoy.

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    Written by Forest Green