Coming Seeds - Part Two
A sequel written due to writer's block, where I couldn't manage to write a standalone piece, so I added to this one and dedicated it to the most beautiful human who is filling the soil with his pure heart.
Coming Seeds - Part Two
For Ewan
Part Two of Coming Seeds https://vocal.media/writers/coming-seeds
Hervonia, spirit of winter’s end, sacrifices her cloak to break winter’s stubborn grip and free her sister Bloom, spirit of spring. Together, they restore warmth and life to the valley, bringing hope and renewal to its people.
But as the thaw spread, Hervonia felt a tremor underfoot, a growing pulse out of rhythm with sap and stream. The ice had cracked, but she couldn’t stop the feeling that something colder had sunk deeper.
Bloom paused, her fingers brushing a green shoot that should have felt fresh with spring’s promise. Instead, the taste was bitter, like ashes and salty water. She frowned. "This isn't spring," she said softly. "This is a wound left in the land."
They followed the scent of the wrongness to the old riverbank where, long ago, women had bartered grain for peace and stitched pacts onto willow bark. Now the water wore a hard, dark sheen.
From the bank, a child stepped forward, a charm of burnt twine at their throat. “My mother says some of the fires were not all for calling you,” they said. “Some were set with jealousy and hate.”
Hervonia closed her eyes. The frost had fed on that spite, not on the cold alone.
“Then the loosening must be done with more than melting,” Bloom murmured. She set her palm to the child’s charm and blew, not the breath that wakes seeds, but the one that remembers the names of those long-ago women. The twine unknotted, and a thread of smoke curled upward, carrying the names softly into the air.
The river breathed.
Hervonia lifted her empty shoulders where her cloak had been and wrapped the quiet of the valley around them. “Come,” she told the child. “Walk with us.”
They moved from field to field, teaching the people a new fire: made of bread shared at doorways, of quarrels spoken then set down, of lullabies taught to those without mothers. Each caused an ember that drifted like silver shards and settled into the soil, making a seed find courage.
By dusk, the valley’s promise was no longer a season’s trick but a vow returning to itself.
About the Creator
Alyson Smith
Neurodivergent, working-class writer and artist diagnosed with Bipolar. Based in Newcastle-upon-Tyne. MA in Creative Writing. Currently waitressing while finishing my novel.
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