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inspired by In Eclipse challenge

By Heather HublerPublished 20 days ago Updated 16 days ago 1 min read
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enigmatic machinations warp and morph, scraps of

carrion meant to keep us oblivious to the truth

leaving our minds bamboozled by doubt and misdirection,

intentional subversion; those in power

pedaling and perpetuating

superstitious misogyny. until we rise up and remove the blinders, we've made ourselves an

endangered species.

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Thank you for continuing to come back for more of my madness!

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You can read all of my In Eclipse challenge entries so far in this compilation post!

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran19 days ago

    "we've made ourselves an endangered species." These lines packed a punch! Loved your Acrostic!

  • Thavien Yliaster19 days ago

    It's like the proverbial carrot on the stick, when it turns out that even if there were two, You have to figure out which carrot we have put there for ourselves and which one was placed by another, yet the result is the same, to lead us astray.

  • Lamar Wiggins19 days ago

    ‘Bamboozled’ Haven’t heard that word in a long time. Great use of it here! Best of luck, Heather!

  • Pauline Fountain19 days ago

    Hi Heather You are a powerhouse of publishing! What a fantastic take on the Challenge. ‘intentional subversion; those in power pedaling and perpetuating’ How very true. I found this quite hard to do - Acrostic. Because i like to intertwine a narrative. I do have 2 poems. This is my long form one. At the end of the page is the short form Pauline 🌸 https://vocal.media/poets/ever-questioning

  • Paul Stewart19 days ago

    LOL...this is brilliant. I mean...carrion...got me hook line and sinker. You tell them, Hubler. Here's someone noone in power or to blame for this sorry state we are in will say "Mea Culpa" ;)

  • Cathy holmes19 days ago

    God damn. You did it again. Outstanding piece. Scream it from the hilltops and halls of parliament.

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