bittersweet
for Hannah Moore's Yugen - a Community Renga
By Heather HublerPublished 20 days ago • 1 min read
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This was written as a continuation in Hannah Moore's brilliant community Renga. My part is 7-7.
Here is the compilation piece:
And the next link provides her wonderful background on this idea and the 'instructions'.
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Tender memories strewn o'er
silken soil, weep farewell tears
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Thank you, Hannah, for such an incredibly inspiring collaboration opportunity!
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Comments (9)
Oooo, this waa so nostalgic and poignant. Loved your lines!
I don't know why, but this reminded me of my old Pokémon Nintendo games that I played a lot as a kid. I booted up my first DS cartridge and I swear to goodness that thing was like a time capsule. Going through all of those Pokémon reminded me of all of the memories I built with that game and the friends and family that I shared those memories with.
Epic word choice! Great 7-7 addition!
'h' ~ Arigato ~ 'j'
Oh these words are so beautiful, Hubler. Well done on your first entry into this stunning Renga! :)
Lovely! How perfect. This poem, this Renga, is sooo goooood. Loving it.
I fee like jumping into this pool.
“Silken soil” is a lovely turn of phrase Heather, and you’ve carried over the same notes as the rest of the Renga before you🤗
Thank you, its beautiful!