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Awkward Senryu

πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜… (Sometimes That's All Can Be Expressed)

By Deasun T. SmythPublished 7 months ago β€’ 1 min read
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Awkward Senryu
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They waved at me, and β€”

I waved back, till they pointed

At someone behind

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Deasun T. Smyth

I’m a First Nations 17 year old young man, probably an old soul (not that there's anything wrong with that). I live in Saskatchewan, and I love reading, writing, conlanging, and collecting sarcastic T-shirts.

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  • Joe Patterson7 months ago

    Guilty of this as well.

  • Mariann Carroll7 months ago

    Lol, I look behind me if I dont know the person . Great Take on the Challenge. I hope you win .

  • I've done this wayyyy too many times. Lol. 🀣🀣🀣🀣

  • Babs Iverson7 months ago

    Fabulous!!! Loving this!!!πŸ’•β€οΈβ€οΈ

  • Ahhhh yes! And its evil twin- They waved at me, but I glanced over my shoulder. There was no one there.

  • Veronica Coldiron7 months ago

    If I only had a dollar for every time this happened to me. LOL! GREAT job!

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