And so it was, with no shame they walked the garden naked for all to see. Until Adam noticed a change when Eve brushed past, her delicate skin glistening in the new light of the sun. With a gentle touch he caressed her…
”Dammit Carl, stop playing with my Barbie!”
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50 word count
This is for the Kayleigh Fraser unofficial challenge that I just had to jump in on.
I mean Fifty-words to write a story, why wouldn’t I?
Thanks to Paul Stewart’s entry, as it is how I found this Fun little challenge.
Here is another one of my entries into the challenge:
About the Creator
JBaz
I have enjoyed writing for most of my life, never professionally.
I wish to now share my stories with others, lets see where it goes.
Born and raised on the Canadian Prairies, I currently reside on the West Coast. I call both places home.
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Expert insights and opinions
Arguments were carefully researched and presented
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Masterful proofreading
Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
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Writing reflected the title & theme
For the Love of Samosas
Prologue Today's post is short fiction in honor of all the hassled parents trying to keep their angsty teens in line. "Bye mum! I'm not coming home for lunch today. I'll be going to Mac's with Kelvin and his buddies before we head to his house to study for a test." With that, Adam Lim careened like the Flash out of his humble HDB abode.
By Michelle Liew5 days ago in Fiction
Peaceful Purpose
I have noticed that in the professional sphere, as far as I have noticed, that many people choose to come to work, mainly with the intention of collecting a paycheck, which I completely understand, unfortunately, we all need money to survive in this world. I also feel very strongly about the fact that if you are going to work in a profession, you should certainly treat that profession, whatever it may be, with the dignity that its purpose entails, whether you are working in the medical field, or working at a fast food restaurant, you should do you best to do the best job you can, because when it comes right down to it, we are all humans, going through the trials, and challenges that this life can bring us, by working together.
By Kaylon Forsyth6 days ago in Humans
Comments (17)
Literally (tee hee hee) made me laugh out loud
Hahaha!! I laughed so hard at the last line!! You're a freaking genius Jason!!! Great work!! 🤣
Haha fun!
Ha! I love it!
Haha. Damnit Carl! That was great.
Reminds me of my introduction to clown ministry in seminary. For the message during worship our clown preacher used a Barbie & Ken pair of dolls to tell the creation story, tossed them in a paper bag, rolled it up, then took a quick peak only to act embarrassed & roll it back up for a little while longer.
What a great take on the challenge, Jason! Well done, Sir!
Made me laugh, JBaz! Broken out of my reverie!
Very cute… I was unaware of this challenge until I saw your story. You inspired me to have a go.
Hahahahahahahahhaha that was hilarious! Loved your story!
Haha I got a good laugh out of this one. Excellent micro
Lol I was not expecting that twist 😂😅 brilliantly done 👌🙏🤍👏
Adorable, laugh out loud twist!
Lol, that was funny 🤣🤣🤣
Love the dose of humour in there!
Ha! Thank you for this- ahem- exposure to the Challenge. It's nude to me....
LOL!! That was an inspired micro!! I thought maybe he'd invite her back to his mojo dojo casa house...hahaha!