Perhaps...
inspired by the 'In Eclipse' challenge
By Heather HublerPublished 29 days ago • Updated 29 days ago • 1 min read
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East to west, she trills a hopeful greeting as she
climbs into the sky, pushing off the backs of
lofty men assured they know their place, and I?
I know not where life's path is leading, but
perhaps our light is wild though fleeting, cos
she and I are surely one and the same– never afraid to be
eclipsed by shadows and healing rain.
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Thank you so much for stopping by :)
I wrote this one after hearing a song called Space in My Heart by Miranda Lambert and Enrique Iglesias on the radio. It just put me in a creative mood :)
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Please take a look at my compilation piece that includes all my 'In Eclipse' challenge entries so far along with a few thoughts on each.
Comments (8)
nice job
Really lovely! Such a captivating voice! Loved the final line
Oh wow, this was extremely powerful! You certainly packed a punched with your Acrostic! Loved it so much!
Another beauty. Well done, my brilliant friend.
oooooooooh, very good, Ms Hubler. Stunning, even? Bene bene benne penne
Loved it!
You are so good at creating beautiful poetry with a pwerful, positive message! Great entry, Heather!
Lovely work!