Early
Before the day breaks
Rise
To bring you comfort
Innocence
With the new horizon
Wishing
To spare a moment
To bring you comfort
And let my soul wake
Freeing
All The heartache
To bring you comfort
Long to hear
The voice of reassurance
Your guidance
Thoughtful wisdom
Yes, I am here
Before
The stress and routine
Of the busy life
Starts once again
To let you know
That you
Are still so loved
So, I whisper
To the virgin air
As I wipe away
Tears
Hoping to bring you comfort
Relinquish
All the fear
Distance
That was once known
I am here to bring you
Comfort
Or maybe
The Comfort
Is just for me alone
About the Creator
C. H. Richard
My passion is and has always been writing. I am particularly drawn to writing fiction that has relatable storylines which hopefully keep readers engaged
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Comments (14)
Love love love this!!! The repetition of "to bring you comfort" was so soothing!
Yes the virgin air line is lovely - well done
"So I whisper to the virgin air"- fantastic!!
Very nice... The breeze to me is comforting. You captured that feel of comfort with your words.
awww, maybe it is just different for everyone, so in a sense, the comfort IS just for you....
This was simply lovely. It felt very honest and comforting. Great work :)
Lovely words
This was a lovely piece. Well done!
So beautiful 😍
Beautifully written!
Wow, this was so beautiful! I loved it!
Awesome!!!
Wow. Incredible. Those last two lines hit me.
Beautifully written! I loved your photo, too.