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Don’t Follow The Crowd

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By Real PoeticPublished 3 months ago 1 min read
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When we go out at night,

we feel a freedom that the

day cannot copy.

When they go out at night,

we assume the worst.

Why do we think everybody’s

trying to hurt us?

I’d bet it’s the programs.

Television isn’t our visions.

It’s time to make our own

decisions and stop the divisions.

No one’s underneath anyone.

We’re all one.

We all want peace.

If everybody’s so afraid of the streets,

then why do we have them?

Can’t we just dig them up

and have them put grass instead?

I feel like we’re being

constantly misled

and told the world

is something

it’s not.

performance poetryFree Verse
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About the Creator

Real Poetic

Welcome to my imagination. ✨

I write what I want, whenever I want.

Thanks for reading!

-R.P. ❤️

Instagram: @therealpoetic

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  • The Dani Writerabout a month ago

    Hoooooooo, a hole in one!!! And my favourite line: "If everybody’s so afraid of the streets, then why do we have them? Can’t we just dig them up and have them put grass instead?" Yes, yes, YESSSSS!!!

  • Tiffany Gordon 2 months ago

    Thought-provoking and well said!

  • Lamar Wiggins2 months ago

    Food for thought! We should all be starving right about now. And I agree, too much TV can lead to brain washing!

  • Babs Iverson3 months ago

    Impressive, inspiring, and provoking!!! Profound performance poem!!!💕❤️❤️

  • This is a really good poem! We're always being pointed in some direction, to believe something for some reason whether we see it or not. I like to think the world is beautiful and maybe not as scary and terrible as the news thinks. But then again, I love sitting out in the middle of the night! Great poem that inspires a lot of thinking!

  • If everybody’s so afraid of the streets, then why do we have them? Can’t we just dig them up and have them put grass instead? These questions were so deep and thought provoking! Loved your poem!

  • Test3 months ago

    Thank you for sharing this thought-provoking piece that encourages reflection on societal constructs and inspires a reevaluation of our collective perceptions.

  • Alex H Mittelman 3 months ago

    Fantastic poem! 🐉🐲

  • That we do & that they do. Except for the arms manufacturers. They love war, so long as it's in someone else's backyard.

  • Kendall Defoe 3 months ago

    Don't have a TV now, and I think I am on the right track. Oh, and congrats on the Challenge win!

  • Steel3 months ago

    She has done it again. Very thought provoking Outstanding 🙂

  • Randy Baker3 months ago

    "I feel like we’re being constantly misled and told the world is something it’s not." I'm reminded of an old song that goes..."it's more than a feeling, more than a feeling..." Well done, RP! As per usual.

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