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diminution of existence

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By Brin J.Published about a month ago 1 min read
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entities of light,

caged in a gilded prison

left in an umbra of darkness,

isolated from the universe,

powerless and without purpose,

scared to venture out of their cages,

even for a life of freedom

nature poetryAcrostic
15

About the Creator

Brin J.

I have a few stories and poems inside me that I want to share. Maybe, if I'm lucky, they'll reach people who'll enjoy them. 📖

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  • Flamance @ lit.22 days ago

    Awesome story I like it congratulations 🎉🎉

  • Cathy holmes26 days ago

    Wow. This is amazing. Those last two lines are especially painful. Excellent entry.

  • Babs Iversonabout a month ago

    Beautifully expressed!!! Loving it!!!❤️❤️💕

  • D.K. Shepardabout a month ago

    Lovely layers in this! Great acrostic!

  • Lindsay Sfaraabout a month ago

    Wow, that was deeper than I expected. Wonderful poem!

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    This was so poignantly beautiful! Loved your Acrostic!

  • Paul Stewartabout a month ago

    Ah, Brin....this is...sublime.

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a month ago

    That was pretty deep! Great entry!

  • D. J. Reddallabout a month ago

    An adroit acrostic, richer in pathos than most!

  • Esala Gunathilakeabout a month ago

    A lovely Acrostic poem.

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