embers of the golden sun
circling the
lunar disc, as if they were timeless lovers,
intimacy of a devastating kind
perhaps the most powerful, and
spectacular sight in the world to behold.
earth is merely the audience for their burning performance.
☽☀☾
About the Creator
Brin J.
I have a few stories and poems inside me that I want to share. Maybe, if I'm lucky, they'll reach people who'll enjoy them. 📖
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
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Comments (9)
Awesome story I like it congratulations 🎉🎉
This is quite a definition of an eclipse good work.
A dangerous kind of love 😅. This is a great poem brin 😊
Loved the last line of earth as the audience! Great acrostic, Brin!
Love this!
Oh wowser, Brin! Stunning work!
Burning performance, that caught my fancy! Awesome Acrostic!
But an appreciative audience for sure.
Nice job!!!