The Paradise Experiment
Don't Know What You Got
Rudy was never one to complain, but he was not sure the one hundred dollar gift card to Billy Bob's Burgers was worth the side effects of a medication he was taking for this clinical trial. The itchiness in his feet from the growing roots was very uncomfortable.
"It is hard to wear a jacket!" He pointed to the branch growing from his side.
The research assistant listened and nodded while texting Dr Mitchell,
"We have another!"
Dr Mitchell smiled looking out at the arborway that used to be a parking lot. The big yellow taxi drove away.
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C. H. Richard
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Comments (21)
Haha. That is so cool.
Well, that was awesome! I see you've been doing your mental exercises because that was deeply clever! 💖
I just went from one ear worm to another, but I always loved this song!! This was really quite clever. I loved it!
Ooooo. Great story. You’re done, man, Just breathe Rudy! 🤣 well, until you wonder “Who Let the Dogs Out.”
C.H. those roots and branches were stunning details and no Rudy, the gift card was NOT worth it!!!😩
Oh soooo good
Oh I love this!!! 👏👏 Although the song will seem a bit different to me now haha
Big yellow taxi....nice, real nice
Brilliant and eerie, loved it! x
Fabulous!!! Loving it!!!💖💖💕
O, Cindy, Cindy, Cindy. How could you leave me out "with" a limb like that? Clever. Very clever.
Whoaaa, this was so brilliant!
An interesting arboreal twist, excellent work
Clever!! I love this, Cindy!!
Another winner! Awesome work Cindy!
This is great and I love that song. I’ll always think of you now when I hear it. Great job, Cindy!
Woah. I love what you did here :)
creepy
Wow this is clever. Well done, Cindy!! 👏
Don't it always seem to go? Great story
You know I'm never again going to be able to listen to the song without thinking about this, right? 🤣 Great job!