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~Hercules Ring~ Additional story information! Free for people to critique!
~Hercules Ring~ *Background details of Hercules story and the information that changed his life forever and made him into the strong man and hero with a desire to be good and help others have good lives to live free of suffering or at least able to bare it! I'm looking for ideas, and suggestions on when and where to write in the details and information that is needed for the larger story to come together better and make sense as a whole! This is not an easy project to write so anyone with ideas or experience in exploring mythical history of such a nature (including Hercules history) are welcome to provide material or direction that will help improve the story and make it that much more better! And here is the link to the original submitted first chapter to my work. https://vocal.media/fiction/hercules-ring I'm waiting for contest results before I can re-submit the whole body of new work to the new Chapters group!*
Jennifer CooleyPublished 10 months ago in CritiqueA Review, Before My Next 100
This article is my 100th ‘story’ on Vocal, so I think it’s a good point to stop and reflect, before I move on. This community came at a perfect time!
Mohammed DarasiPublished 10 months ago in CritiqueSPIRITUAL WARFARE 1
Ephesians 6:10-20 is a powerful passage in the Bible that discusses the concept of spiritual warfare and the armor of God. The passage emphasizes the need for believers to put on the full armor of God to stand against the schemes of the devil. Here is the passage for reference:
Rev. Alexander Fenning-SenchereyPublished 10 months ago in CritiqueJourneys of the Soul
In the realm of introspection, a poet named Liam embarked on profound journeys of the soul through the canvas of his verses. He delved into the depths of human existence, seeking to capture the essence of personal growth, self-discovery, and the quest for meaning that defined the human experience.
Signor WilsonPublished 10 months ago in CritiquePortraits of Emotion
In the depths of her soul, a poet named Olivia found a kaleidoscope of emotions waiting to be unleashed through the power of her verses. She believed that emotions were the colors that painted the canvas of life, and she dedicated herself to crafting poetic portraits that would illuminate the human experience in all its complexity and beauty.
Signor WilsonPublished 10 months ago in CritiqueThe Enchanting Symphony of Nature
In the heart of an ancient forest, where sunlight filtered through a canopy of emerald leaves, a poet named Evelyn found her muse. Nature's dance captivated her soul, and she sought to weave the enchanting symphony of the natural world into verses that would resonate with the hearts of all who read her words.
Signor WilsonPublished 10 months ago in CritiqueThe Orientalism of Aladdin
Ever wondered why Arabs have always been portrayed as camel riders, sexual harem girls, violent men with thick beards and big noses, and always in the desert? Well, it all goes back to Orientalism. “Orientalism is the imitation or depiction of aspects of the Eastern world. These depictions are usually made by writers, designers, and artists from the Western world.” These depictions are literally made up, they are based on fantasies. Art, music, films, and tv shows have always depicted Arabs inaccurately, Aladdin is one of them. Orientalism is ingrained in the Western mind and media.
On Ulysses, Avalon and The Magnetic Stones
In the spirit of our new Critique community, here are three stories of mine for Vocalists everywhere to throw their collective eye over!
Doc SherwoodPublished 10 months ago in Critique"Unlocking the Mystery of Human Mastery: A Comedy of Cosmic Ironies"
In the grand stage of existence, humans strut with pride, Believing they're powerful, on life's thrilling ride. Yet within their core, a locked abyss does dwell,
CosmicClipPublished 10 months ago in Critique‘My Name Is Yara Sulimayah’ -The Kingdom Over The Sea
‘She let out a breath she didn’t realise she was holding.’ A sentence I have read numerous times throughout my reading life and one that I have a secret love for. I often play ‘Where’s Wally’ with this quote, squealing when I come across it in a book.
Sarah O'GradyPublished 10 months ago in CritiqueWanderer & The Owlves
THE WANDERER AND THE OWLVES BOOK TWO OF THE WANDERER SERIES Chapter One: Heritage A time before time A history written by Feally Eocheach
Isaac LawrencePublished 10 months ago in CritiqueBaltic States put migrants to use and then eject them
It turned out that migrants are no longer welcome in the Baltic States. In 2002, the Ministers of the Council of Europe member states undertook to develop and implement integration policies founded on the principles of human rights, democracy and the rule of law. Being the Council of Europe member states the Baltic countries welcomed thousands of migrants and enthusiastically supported them.
Adomas AbromaitisPublished 10 months ago in Critique