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Your supernova (r)ejected most of her mass.

a limerick

By Naomi GoldPublished 2 months ago 1 min read
Your supernova (r)ejected most of her mass.
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Our world filled with hunger and poverty

idolizes starlets—ironically,

having everything

and eating nothing;

starlets count not blessings, but calories

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Naomi Gold

Psalm 23:5

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  • Aphotic2 months ago

    Great limerick! It is a sad reality, unfortunately. Well done.

  • Kristen Balyeat2 months ago

    Wow, this is a perfect, sad, fantastic limerick! Great work, Naomi!

  • Marsha Singh2 months ago

    Oof, this hit me right in the heart. Sad on many levels. An ugly truth expressed beautifully.

  • Donna Fox2 months ago

    Truer words have never been said, you will likely ruffle a few feathers with this one. And I am all here for it! 💜

  • Roy Stevens2 months ago

    How did we as a species get this messed up? We have a long way to climb to dig out of this hole. You keep me thinking, Naomi. Thanks!

  • Donna Renee2 months ago

    Very true and very absurd! 🙄❤️

  • Dana Crandell2 months ago

    On point! Well done, Naomi!

  • Dana Stewart2 months ago

    So true!

  • Alexis Dean Jr.2 months ago

    Can always count on you 👏🏾

  • Gal Mux2 months ago

    So true!

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  • Paul Stewart2 months ago

    Hits the nail on the head. So true! Love the reality of this and it's a great limerick too!

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