Your supernova (r)ejected most of her mass.
a limerick
Our world filled with hunger and poverty
idolizes starlets—ironically,
having everything
and eating nothing;
starlets count not blessings, but calories
About the Creator
Naomi Gold
Psalm 23:5
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Great limerick! It is a sad reality, unfortunately. Well done.
Wow, this is a perfect, sad, fantastic limerick! Great work, Naomi!
Oof, this hit me right in the heart. Sad on many levels. An ugly truth expressed beautifully.
Truer words have never been said, you will likely ruffle a few feathers with this one. And I am all here for it! 💜
How did we as a species get this messed up? We have a long way to climb to dig out of this hole. You keep me thinking, Naomi. Thanks!
Very true and very absurd! 🙄❤️
On point! Well done, Naomi!
So true!
Can always count on you 👏🏾
So true!
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Outstanding
Hits the nail on the head. So true! Love the reality of this and it's a great limerick too!