you are the ocean
to behold your majesty
The calming whisper of raw power
The promise of peace in its presence
passion barely held back
I am intrigued
I am mesmerized
I crave your caress
I have always loved being near water
makes sense why I would find myself pulled to you
I saw you
And I started to see clearer than ever
I know what it feels like to want a person in your life forever
And I knew you were the one I could wait for
I saw you
And I felt seen
You aren’t always on my mind
But when you are it’s peaceful
I dream of the quiet moments with you
I hope to make the most of life by doing new things with you
About the Creator
Hufflecup
I want nothing more than to dedicate my life to writing, so I figured I would start here to test the waters. I will be submitting stories to as many communities as possible.
A Hiatus Turned Reflection
No, I wasn't dead, nor fighting off some great mystical beast tyrannizing a group of villagers. To those who look forward to what I have to say, or to put it better, write, I am genuinely sorry for my disappearance from the Vocal platform and community.
By Dailyn Townes2 days ago in Humans
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Stopping by again to let you know about a Challenge I entered on Medium Writers and Vocal Creators support Group in which participants were to go to the "Writers We Love" spotlight section of the Vocal home page and choose two writers to read two stories each (at least) and comment on the stories read. Then we were to write a story for Vocal featuring the two writers and make some kind of commentary on their work. I chose to feature two of your pieces in one of my two stories I had published today. The first was your poem, "You are the Ocean", and the second was "Just a Casual Epiphany". Both were excellent and deserved to be shared widely. I wish you the best in your writing career!
What a lovely metaphor...she is the ocean, its power and magnetism...nature poem and love poem in one. I love it! Hearted.