I see the world before me,
A canvas painted bright and bold,
Colors of every hue and shade,
A masterpiece that never grows old.
I hear the sounds around me,
A symphony of joy and peace,
Laughter, music, nature's choir,
A harmony that will never cease.
I smell the fragrant flowers,
Their perfume sweet and pure,
A fragrance that uplifts my soul,
A scent that helps me endure.
I taste the flavors on my tongue,
A delicious, savory feast,
A palate of culinary delights,
A flavor that's never least.
I touch the world around me,
Its textures soft and smooth,
A world of endless wonder,
A universe of which I approve.
These senses are a gift,
A connection to the world we know,
A reminder of our humanity,
A gift that helps us grow.
With joyful senses at our side,
We face the world with ease,
We find delight in every moment,
A life lived with such great ease.
So let us revel in these senses,
And let them fill us with delight,
For life is rich and full of wonder,
A gift we should hold tight.
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions