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With Pure love, I want to be with You till Heaven 💗

My love my life

By Naveed Published about a month ago 1 min read
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Beautiful feelings

My love.

To wear the color of your eyes

Autumn waited so long

As if you descended from the sky

A flower grows in a galaxy

Your comfort in this silence.

Philosophers have written fiction.

Your voice is the noise that

Time can change the pace

I am called an extra body

I am often a figure of assumption.

But my sight is unconscious.

Waited for your view

As if a butterfly has a smell disease.

Like flowers love color.

Dawn and Dewdrops.

I got you just like that ♥

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About the Creator

Naveed

Let me submit, writing and solitude are essential. Writing is not possible in Mahfil Yaran. Why a person writes, how he writes, why he thinks, nothing can be said with certainty.

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    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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  • Movie Foo15 days ago

    👩‍❤️‍💋‍👩👨‍❤️‍💋

  • Mohamed fasim16 days ago

    Nicely

  • "So beautiful I like it"

  • Lovely sentiments, friend! Particulrly here: "Like flowers love color. Dawn and Dewdrops."

  • Antoni Nima19 days ago

    😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 Beautiful poem, I really loved this.

  • Darkos21 days ago

    Beautiful ❤️!

  • Varshini H28 days ago

    Overwhelming 💓

  • E.K. Daniels29 days ago

    Beautiful!

  • The Dani Writer30 days ago

    This is beautiful Naveed!

  • Anna Michelleabout a month ago

    Absolutely precious

  • L.C. Schäferabout a month ago

    Beautiful! Why doesn't this have Top Story?

  • Catherine Nyomendaabout a month ago

    I felt butterflies in my stomach as I read this. The woman you wrote for is a lucky one. Sweet poem indeed

  • Hannah Mooreabout a month ago

    Lovely. I love the line about the colours of the eyes.

  • sleepy draftsabout a month ago

    This is so beautiful. ❤️

  • Kodahabout a month ago

    ❤️Omg this was incredibly beautiful ❤️

  • Paulina Pachelabout a month ago

    Beautiful :)

  • Jonalyn Nebreabout a month ago

    a very heartfelt piece ❤️

  • Andrea Corwin about a month ago

    Dawn and dew drops, beautiful. 💕

  • Joe O’Connorabout a month ago

    I like the sentiment behind this, and the different ways you have found to describe this relationship.

  • Tushar1770about a month ago

    "Your poem is a beautiful tapestry of emotions and imagery, woven together with delicate yet powerful words

  • Ed Heerkensabout a month ago

    Awww, what a beautiful

  • Frankie Martinelliabout a month ago

    Outstanding

  • Mariann Carrollabout a month ago

    Mystical love 😍

  • Constance Greyabout a month ago

    Your work is truly commendable. Loved it ❤️

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