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Discipline

By Jordan ZunigaPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
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A constant attempt, a failed try, a readjustment of ones approach,

To forge in fire, your greatest desire, above all scorn and reproach,

The constant slash, the continued swing, frustration sooner stayed,

To handle the grip, to tighten or loosen, the holding of the blade,

To weather or persist through thunders scorn, to sharpen the mettle to pursue,

To remove the rust from the iron itself, to conquer fear and subdue,

The stance before, the call to war, a moment to consider and then reflect,

To discipline and adjust, to instruct and receive,

Blessed is the one who can heed what is correct.

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Jordan Zuniga

Aspiring christian creative writer creating pieces to provoke thought and give God and Lord Jesus Christ the glory! God bless and I hope you’re doing well!

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