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I am blemished
I am flawed
Help me to see what you see
In me
The strength you pronounce
The giver I can be
The brave and courageous
I don’t see those in me
The wisdom you share
The sin you take
I wish only to be all that you see
In me
Beautiful and gifted
You say to me
You have more inside then
You believe
Listen to me
For my child it’s all that and more I see
I knew you as I know you now
A child I love and so should you
I am not blemished
I am not flawed
I am exactly who you created me to be
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Thought provoking. Self questioning of one’s self is a real struggle. Taking a moment to reflect on our outward actions and responsibilities towards others could help others to ask themselves how they appear. Great message towards self improvement.