You asked me where I wanted to be
If there was a special place I dream of
A sandy beach?
A mountain cabin?
Alone with Mother Nature
Or crowded in the big city?
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You asked me, then you left before I had a chance to answer
Now you’re back and demanding a response. So, yes
Yes, there is a place I want to go
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It doesn’t matter if the sun shines
It doesn’t matter if it rains or snows
Sandy beach, powdered mountain top
Tropical rain forest or concrete jungle
The setting doesn't matter
The location makes no difference
The only place I’m dreaming of right now
The only place I want to be
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Is anywhere, but here with you
About the Creator
Cathy holmes
Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.
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Comments (4)
BOOM 💥
Oh, I felt that! Beautifully expressed.
So sad when that happens 😢
Very hones and to-the-point.