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What They Did When They Were Cut in Pieces


By Rowan Finley Published 2 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - April 2024

They changed the world,

one day at a rhyme,

despite negativity and worldly slime.

Some conquered physics,

and some did the unthinkable,

dreams rose, utterly unsinkable.

Some cured diseases,

but they had to collaborate,

cohabitating with mission at any rate.

Their age, ethnicity, and background,

didn’t make any difference,

their purpose, they felt its magnificence!

Mistakes, they owned and handmade,

but those, too, were dear progress,

ideas crushed, as grapes in a wine press.

Some were skilled to listen closely,

carrying secrets, that bloomed,

into bubbles of blessing in cozy rooms.

Some analyzed archeological findings,

and whispered history’s praise,

or sorted through mystery and maze.


About the Creator

Rowan Finley

Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. Aspiring licensed mental health counselor. My real name is Jesse Balogh.

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