Weeds
a tautogram poem
We wait watching,
wonderous
wager why’s
wishing -
whispered warnings
we want wantonness
wounded waltzes
willful whirlwinds
witnessed witchcraft
winks, wine
weakened
wholeheartedly we walk,
wade within withered wildflowers
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well done and loved the flow of it
very good
Such a wonderful poem. Love the flow of it.
I really liked that one Dana. I hope to get to your longer work soon. At the moment I'm swamped with comment replies, but you'll be hearing from me. Thanks for subscribing BTW!
Thankyou for sharing loved it
Wow!
Ohh found Something interesting here.
You used one of my favorite letters and mention something I love, wildflowers. This is a winner all the way around!
Well-worded...
Well done. I find it interesting how I am drawn to faded wild flowers. Is that a sign I’m coming to terms with the passing of time? 🤔
Wonderful! - Anneliese
Great job))
Ethereal magic 💖
This poem has a strong sense of introspection and contemplation. The use of alliteration and repetition of certain words throughout the poem gives it a rhythmic quality, making it feel almost like a chant. Dear [dana stewart], I hope this message finds you well. I have recently written a poem and I'm seeking feedback from an expert like you to help me improve it. I would greatly appreciate any tips or suggestions you may have to make my poem better. Here's a link to my poem: [https://vocal.media/poets/night-of-terror-a-haunting-journey-of-a-fateful-couple]. Thank you for taking the time to read my message, and I look forward to hearing back from you. Best regards, [muhammad ali ]
gorgeous work! Congrats on your Top Story! 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾
Waltz of the Weeds--I can fee the movement in your choice of words---moving back & forth in the breeze.
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This reads like dreamspeak, incoherent to our conscious ears, yet striking an unconscious chord that says "there's wisdom here" and I linger to find it. Beautiful. Well done.
I like it.
I wanted to take a moment to express my gratitude for your wonderful tautogram poem, "Weeds." Your creative and unique use of language truly impressed me, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I appreciate the effort you put into creating this piece and sharing it with the world. Your poem has left a lasting impact on me, and I am grateful for the opportunity to have experienced it. Thank you for your talent and dedication to your craft. Your work has inspired me, and I look forward to reading more of your writing in the future.
Ahhhhh. Yes. Lovely. 🥰
This is a talent, you are not just slapping words that begin with the same letter together . You create a complete story , a visual.
Great job! I love this particular take on the prompt.
https://vocal.media/poets/sensual-sway
Nice. Check mine too