I'm home, now. My
grandmother hangs
on the wall. Softly, and
smiling. A child.
I study her features—
plumper than mine—blue paint
in her eyes, unaware
of me standing here,
swaying here—shivering.
I look at her face, and I
graze at her smile with
the tips of my fingers. At
fifteen, a job; at eighteen
she married. With child.
At forty, a screaming and
powerful force on the streets,
demanding the right
to choose—now.
So we started all
over again—
I screamed and I shouted; I
laughed, even, some—
solidarity laughs—and
we marched.
I'm home, now. My
grandmother hangs on
the wall. I touch her face
softly, once more. Then
my hand comes
back down to my
belly. We marched.
About the Creator
Luisa Gillies
Hi! I'm Luisa.
I write short stories and poetry.
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another great piece of poetry Luisa .good luck in the competition .
Beautiful work. Imagery and message really resounded