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we all bleed the same

a poem

By Deasun T. SmythPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
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we all bleed the same
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We all bleed the same.

Every colour, and name.

We all bleed the same.

The strong or lame.

We all bleed the same.

Regardless of fame.

We all bleed the same.

The wildest, and tame.

We all bleed the same.

Even if you lost your flame.

We all bleed the same.

It’s what I proclaim.

We all bleed the same.

This ain’t no game.

We all bleed the same.

There is no one to blame.

We all bleed the same.

Don’t let hate take aim.

We all bleed the same.

Our fallen souls reclaim.

We all bleed the same.

Because we are the same.

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About the Creator

Deasun T. Smyth

I’m a First Nations 16 year old young man, probably an old soul (not that there's anything wrong with that). I live in Saskatchewan, and I love reading, writing, conlanging, and collecting sarcastic T-shirts.

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Outstanding

Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!

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  1. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

  2. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

  3. Heartfelt and relatable

    The story invoked strong personal emotions

  1. On-point and relevant

    Writing reflected the title & theme

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  • Deasun T. Smyth (Author)2 years ago

    to be honest it was based loosely off of a song, but not enough to cause copyright infringement.

  • I agree with Mariann. This would be an awesome song. And I'm a singer/songwriter so I don't day that lightly. LOL!

  • Mariann Carroll2 years ago

    I can see this made in a song. I like the message and the rhyme as well .😊

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