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Warmth in A Garden

by Lisa A Lachapelle about a month ago in love poems · updated 21 days ago
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Sure thing, is it?

Photo by Achim Bongard

I dream

I dream

The daring

The unwavering look in mind

Like stealth with a beginning and no end

Filled with a flavor

Almost reluctant to charms but unyielding

In Dreamtime

Unless the very pages stroke a mind

Un-gaining in purpose

To keep the if only

Close to surface

Close to resurrection

Close to abandon

Unwavering

The perfect waters

Nature bows to amazons

That are frequent in their rising

Cornucopia of trust

Perfect in a semblance of divine

Where is your comfort?

Listen sweet, it's here in my hand

That touches your mind

That strokes your face

That fills your being with grace

To feel or think it makes it a sure thing

I dream

I dream

~/\~

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Lisa A Lachapelle

Novels in 2012, 2013, 2015. Poems in Library of Congress editions, World Poetry Movement,Great Poets of America. Wordpress,Notes From Caeli's Well; RPI Poets Are Heroes Valiant Edition mag, Vocal. https://lalachapelle.webstarts.com/

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  • G. WadeRoss 19 days ago

    Amazing writing and beautifully said!

  • Carol Townendabout a month ago

    This has been creatively written. You use your vocabulary in an excellent way, and the imagery certainly kept me reading.

  • Sarah Loydabout a month ago

    Very beautiful. Well done!

  • Jason Ray Mortonabout a month ago

    Such a beautifully worded poem. Great work Lisa

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