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Warmth in A Garden

Sure thing, is it?

By Canuck Scriber L.Lachapelle AuthorPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
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I dream

I dream

The daring

The unwavering look in mind

Like stealth with a beginning and no end

Filled with a flavor

Almost reluctant to charms but unyielding

In Dreamtime

Unless the very pages stroke a mind

Un-gaining in purpose

To keep the if only

Close to surface

Close to resurrection

Close to abandon

Unwavering

The perfect waters

Nature bows to amazons

That are frequent in their rising

Cornucopia of trust

Perfect in a semblance of divine

Where is your comfort?

Listen sweet, it's here in my hand

That touches your mind

That strokes your face

That fills your being with grace

To feel or think it makes it a sure thing

I dream

I dream

~/\~

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Canuck Scriber L.Lachapelle Author

Published Poet and Author. Making rainy days feel like Sundays with words.

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  • Gary Wade2 years ago

    Amazing writing and beautifully said!

  • Carol Townend2 years ago

    This has been creatively written. You use your vocabulary in an excellent way, and the imagery certainly kept me reading.

  • Sarah Loyd2 years ago

    Very beautiful. Well done!

  • Such a beautifully worded poem. Great work Lisa

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