Warmth in A Garden
Sure thing, is it?
I dream
I dream
The daring
The unwavering look in mind
Like stealth with a beginning and no end
Filled with a flavor
Almost reluctant to charms but unyielding
In Dreamtime
Unless the very pages stroke a mind
Un-gaining in purpose
To keep the if only
Close to surface
Close to resurrection
Close to abandon
Unwavering
The perfect waters
Nature bows to amazons
That are frequent in their rising
Cornucopia of trust
Perfect in a semblance of divine
Where is your comfort?
Listen sweet, it's here in my hand
That touches your mind
That strokes your face
That fills your being with grace
To feel or think it makes it a sure thing
I dream
I dream
~/\~
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Canuck Scriber L.Lachapelle Author
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Comments (4)
Amazing writing and beautifully said!
This has been creatively written. You use your vocabulary in an excellent way, and the imagery certainly kept me reading.
Very beautiful. Well done!
Such a beautifully worded poem. Great work Lisa