Wangaratta to Wodonga
The full moon races beside the train
On the night train between
Wangaratta and Wodonga
The moon rises from the plain
Palest yellow to silver white
Flickering between stringybark and redgum
Shadows and
I’m back in the home of the gumtrees
After seeing them everywhere I went.
Gumtrees in Batumi offering shade
By the train tracks racing the waves
Of the Black Sea.
Cracking cement sidewalks
In Tirana and dotting
The Adriatic beaches from Bari to Porti di Vasti.
An odd colonisation
In reverse
Eucalypt invasion
Flame-oil grey-green vanguard
Of gumtrees and
Every place I went I thought
These bloody trees have
Got there first.
A row of streetlights in some nameless little town
Somewhere after Wangaratta
Floats beneath the moon
As it flies beside
The train
Forming an artificial alter
Of light for Luna to continue
Her rise.
Grain silos compete with the gumtrees
To flicker out the moon’s light
As we approach Wodonga in the dark.
The last time I was here
All was drought
Now water lays on the ground in
Pools of light full of
Elongated reflections of a second moon
Sunken to earth.
Nightlights on the ground until
The pools evaporate.
About the Creator
Roderick Makim
Read one too many adventure stories as a child and decided I'd make that my life.
I grew up on a cattle station in the Australian Outback and decided to spend the rest of my life seeing the rest of the world.
For more: www.roderickmakim.com
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Comments (3)
Such a beautifully told poem that paints the moonlit scene with vivid imagery. Love it! Congrats on the contest.
As an Australian, I loved this poem! It evokes such a strong sense of the beautiful yet unforgiving Aussie climate...I can smell the eucalyptus!
what fantastic imagery here, Roderick!