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Visions of Angels in My Head

by Story Girl CA- Caroline about a month ago in sad poetry · updated about a month ago
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Just wanted to say it's a sad poem but I'm not sad.

Feeling alone,

wishing for a friend,

to save me from the horror story that never seems to end.

With visions of angels swirling in my head,

I dream and hope, but I know this will never be,

of an angel swooping down from heaven to save me.

In my mind, I see white feathered wings gently cover me,

hugging me close,

my worries vanish, and I'm no longer a ghost.

Nestled within the comfort of the angel's wings,

love envelops my entire being.

Still, those boulders fly, and I dodge them as they come rolling by.

Once in a while, a boulder crashes into me,

it pushes me far away,

and no angel comes to my aid, only me.

I pick myself up, bleeding and bruised,

I carry on, somehow I do.

Let's see what tomorrow brings.

and shall we not forget, All Hallows Eve is near,

it’s that time of year, those boulders I fear.

Visions of angels in my head,

giving me strength to march ahead.

One day I'll scale my prison wall,

this prison of fear will crash and fall.

sad poetry

About the author

Story Girl CA- Caroline

Writing is my source of peace. I write short stories: memoirs, fiction, and on matters of the soul.

Writing could have been a career for me but I let it slip away. It’s never too late to start again. I hope you enjoy what you read here.

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  • Babs Iversonabout a month ago

    Creative & impressive!!! Left a heart!!!

  • Rick Henryabout a month ago

    Well written with a message that was creatively conveyed.

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    Wow! This was so fantastic!

  • D-Donohoeabout a month ago

    Sad but with hope! Great job!

  • Cathy holmesabout a month ago

    Oh my. This is a gorgeous piece. Well done

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