Nightfall approaches the city
Illuminated sidewalks
Headlights shine across the streets
But does anyone acknowledge the night?
Because the sidewalks are filled with people’s chatter
Music blares from some grand venue
Silence? Nonexistent in this lively place
Hasn’t the city noticed that night has stepped into view?
Quiet. Solitude. Darkness. Sleep.
Oh, what I long for the night should be!
The city scene is full of life
Noise. Crowds. Bright city lights. People wide awake.
It’s the nighttime, can’t they see?
Close the windows! Draw the blinds! You, who desires sleep.
Maybe if you’re lucky amongst the glow of the city’s lights
You’ll catch a glimpse of the moon. Just maybe a star
For the city is the most bright and lively at the arrival of the night.
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Jasmine Aguilar
Fascinated by pop culture and its effect on society... movies, music, books.. and pretty much anything.
I love writing and write a little bit of everything including a science fiction WIP!
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During my time in Nagoya I worked and lived at the strangely famous hostel and café Nagonoya. With its chequered floors and florescent lighting it felt quite dated, but I think that was supposed to be part of the charm. The dorms were always fully booked on weekends with domestic tourists and there was always a buzz in the downstairs café. Camera crews were constantly in and out of the place interviewing the Japanese staff members who worked the café. I think it had something to do with the egg sandwiches. At least that was what was on most of the merchandise, except for that one dishcloth with the owner’s face on it. Was I being employed by a local celebrity?
By Susanna Kiernan6 days ago in Wander
Comments (5)
Great feel of night life in a big situation 👍
Nicely done.
I enjoyed this
I liked this and it is the first time I have seen it
Good description! Nice job. :)