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Underwater Beauty

A Mythical Charm

By Quincy.VPublished about a year ago β€’ 1 min read
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On Mermaid Day, the ocean sings

As mermaids dance with their fishy fins

Their tails shimmer with iridescent hues

And pearls adorn their flowing hairdos

They glide through the water with effortless grace

Their voices enchanting, like a mystical trace

The waves obey their every command

As they swim towards the coral sand

Seashells and starfish decorate their homes

In underwater caves, where they freely roam

A world so magical, it's hard to believe

A place where the mermaids can truly breathe

On Mermaid Day, we celebrate

These mythical creatures, so kind and great

We honor their beauty and their strength

And hope that they swim with us at any length

So raise a glass to the mermaids below

And let their magic continue to flow

May we always treasure their oceanic realm

And the stories of mermaids at the helm.

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I hope my poem brought you some delight, And transported you to the magical world out of sight, May the mermaid's grace and beauty stay with you, And inspire you in whatever you pursue.

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Quincy.V

My blog is a space where I share tips, insights, and inspiration related to the topic, with the goal of helping my readers improve their area of interest.

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  • Novel Allenabout a year ago

    I love the cover pic. Brilliantly done.

  • Thavien Yliasterabout a year ago

    I just got reminded of the mockumentary Animal Planet did about mermaids. Man, that was dope. I hope that we get to see something that like again get made soon, fictitious or real.

  • Stephen Kramer Avitabileabout a year ago

    Loved this one! Always fascinated by mermaids and I thought you did a great job with he subject matter. My favorite line was this one: "Their voices enchanting, like a mystical trace."

  • Kristen Balyeatabout a year ago

    Beautifully written and magical! πŸ’«

  • Mohamed Jakkathabout a year ago

    This poem is a beautiful tribute to the enchanting world of mermaids and their mythical charm. The imagery used is vivid and captivating, and the rhythm and rhyme of the lines make it a pleasure to read aloud. The poem's message of celebrating and honoring the beauty and strength of these magical creatures is heartwarming and inspiring. Thank you, Quincy.v, for sharing this lovely piece with us!

  • Donna Fox (HKB)about a year ago

    You chose a striking and absolutely picture for this one! It almost matches in comparison to the beauty of your words. I love your descriptions of Mermaids, it really romanticized them for me! πŸ’œ

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