There where..
Come on, take me and take me back to our first day.
Take me where the rhinos die of thirst
where flocks of regrets do not fly in the sky,
take me where the birds know how to swim,
take me where "yes" survived him "maybe".
take me, please, where happiness is not measured in seconds.
take me where the unicorns walk.
Please go from the bottom of my heart to where Marco Polo didn't even end up.
Take me where a wind of joy blows incessantly
And sadness is just ephemeral dandelion
Take me where the pandas are buzzing, and the rainbows refuse to arch over the mess.
Come on, take me and take me back to our first day.
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Karla Andrea
I like to write poems when I'm sad.
I'm shy when it comes to my writing.
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