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The View

by Heather Hubler 18 days ago in nature poetry · updated 17 days ago
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a mountain haiku

Muscles pushed to max,

Soul preparing to take flight,

Soaring from the view.

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Heather Hubler

Coffee/reading/writing/family–my favorite things in life. I have a degree in biochemistry but my split personality loves creative writing just as much!

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  • Thavien Yliaster10 days ago

    Taking it all in No such splendor equals this Fulfilling My Soul

  • I like that your last line could be understood as your soul soaring because of the view…or perhaps away from it! Sometimes beautiful things are difficult to observe.

  • panchhi meshram16 days ago

    Nice

  • Donna Harris16 days ago

    Nice. I like the picture and words. The picture makes me feel like I am on top of the world. Thanks for sharing this.

  • That last line tied it all perfectly

  • Donna Harris17 days ago

    Inspiring. Thank you, great poem and picture.

  • Wow! Extremely liberating!

  • Christina Hunter17 days ago

    Love this ❤️

  • Judey Kalchik17 days ago

    Image looks like you just took flight, too

  • Gina C.17 days ago

    I love how the mountain makes you fly. ❤️ Gorgeous!

  • Dawn Salois17 days ago

    Great work! So impactful in such a small number of words.

  • AGB17 days ago

    Your first line is the best description! It made me think of all the hikes I've done. So true! Love it

  • Tiffany Gordon 17 days ago

    Beautiful!!!!

  • Angel Whelan17 days ago

    Like an eagle in its eyrie watching over the world below. Lovely

  • Jason Ray Morton17 days ago

    Very visual for such short work. Awesome!

  • Keila Aartila17 days ago

    I can feel it! :)

  • Cathy holmes17 days ago

    Beautiful piece. Well done.

  • Babs Iverson17 days ago

    Superb💕

  • Absolute perfection

  • Rick Henry18 days ago

    It's amazing that house from so very few words you were able to come up with something that says a lot. I read it five or six times over and each time in the end it spells VICTORY!

  • The satisfaction that comes from giving your all. Great job

  • Subhi Najar18 days ago

    This is so powerful! I love this dilemma between what's physical and whats spiritual! great piece

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