The River of Time
Some Thoughts on Time, Analogising It As A River
I think this came about because I am reading “The Fabulous Riverboat” the second book in Philip Jose Farmer’s “Riverworld” series, plus the songs “River of Dreams” by Billy Joel and “River of Salt” by Bryan Ferry with the addition of an inspirational spark that I always have resulted in this poem.
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The River of Time has a one way flow
Where it will take us we really don’t know
We can never go back, We Can Recall
Time Gives Us Memories, Treasures For All
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The River of Time is so relentless
Nothing can stop it’s continuous progress
Carrying Us On, Towards Tomorrow
Swept By The River, To Hope or Sorrow
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The River of Time Gives Us Our Future
That is its Purpose, It is its Nature
The River of Time May be relentless
Be True To Yourself To Find Your Success
The River of Time will not ever stop
Go with the flow, you will come out on top
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