Poets logo

The Great Thing About You...

by Andrew Dominguez 2 years ago in love poems
Report Story

Hopefully Romantic Amidst Panic

The great thing about you...

The great thing about you, is that you fight for the little guy.

The great thing about you, is that you fight for what’s right.

The great thing about you, is that you manage to compliment me while teasing me.

The great thing about you, is that you look into my eyes; you look into my weirdness; you look past my dorky facade; my complete lack of coolness; you see me for what I am; you make me feel great about it.

The great thing about you, is that you tell me what I feel, even when I don’t want to hear it from your lips.

The great thing about you is that when I’m ready to surrender, you save me through a text, Facebook messenger, or through one within our equivocal paradise.

The great thing about you, is that you’re not great...

You pretend to revel in my idealization of you, when in reality you’re insecure.

You don’t take compliments well.

Your way with words is sometimes self-defeating.

You sometimes make me want to yell; sometimes you make me want to cry; sometimes you’re just a guy.

You’re just a guy, but still the guy I awaited.

Awaited throughout high school, community college, and University.

Awaited while watching The Holiday, Bridget Jones’s Diary, When Harry Met Sally, Two For the Road, The Notebook

Awaited after my eighteenth birthday; awaited after my 21st birthday right of passage and the shots of Patron, Bacardi, Jameson and random addresses that followed.

Awaited during my first, second, third, fourth, fifth, sixth, seventh, eight, and ninth job, all the existential murkiness between.

Awaited and who I became certain would never come, might not exist.

The great thing about you, is that you awaited until the right time.

The great thing about you...is the great thing about me.

love poems

About the author

Andrew Dominguez

Greetings! My name is Andrew Judeus. I am an LA-based writer with a passion for creating romantic narratives. Hopefully my daily wanderings into the land of happily ever after will shed some light into your life. Enjoy!

Reader insights

Be the first to share your insights about this piece.

How does it work?

Add your insights


There are no comments for this story

Be the first to respond and start the conversation.

Sign in to comment

    Find us on social media

    Miscellaneous links

    • Explore
    • Contact
    • Privacy Policy
    • Terms of Use
    • Support

    © 2022 Creatd, Inc. All Rights Reserved.