The Forbidden Forest: A Poem
A secret of rare beauty and wonder
I heard the whispers, of a place untold,
Where secrets lay hidden, and mysteries unfold.
It was a place forbidden, with danger made clear,
But my curiosity grew, year after year.
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I couldn't resist, the urge to explore,
To see what laid within, and what it held in store.
So I gathered my courage, and took my first step,
Into the unknown, where I cautiously crept.
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The trees stood tall, with leaves aglow,
the rustling ground sang a melody from below.
The whispers of danger, did not deter,
For the lure of mystery, was too great to defer.
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The journey was long, and the path unclear,
But the mystery and beauty, soon did appear.
A sight beyond words, so rare and so bright,
In the forbidden forest, I beheld its sight.
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In tales and legends, I heard of this beast,
So rare and so wondrous, never to be ceased.
A creature of beauty, with grace and might,
That lived in myth, hidden from sight.
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Her aura was captivating, and her presence commanding,
I couldn't help but feel, both fear and understanding.
For I knew not, if she was friend or foe,
Or whether her beauty, was meant to bestow.
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I embraced the moment, and basked in her light,
For the beauty of this creature, was well worth the fright.
She whispered softly, with a gentle purr,
And in that moment, all my fears did blur.
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There I stood, in wonder and delight,
And marvelled at the creature, that shone so bright.
For I had found, what I thought was a myth,
A rare and beautiful thing, that filled me with bliss.
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Her existence was pure and in peace she lay,
knowing she was far from folk and harms way.
My discovery was one I vowed to hold dear,
So I could let her live free and from fear.
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Returning to my home, a secret I had learnt,
One that I must keep, although my heart yearns.
A desire to revisit, the forest forbidden,
But knowing for her safety, she must stay hidden.
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I hold her close, in my dreams each night,
And let her remind me, of what's pure and what's right.
For I know this is a story, so unique and so rare,
If folk where to know what they were missing, they couldn’t help but cause despair.
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Comments (8)
Such a great story told in the poem. The mysterious tone of the whole poem was great. The way you described the scenary and the discovery at the end really did help me imagine it in my head eventhough it's about a mythical creature!)
A beautiful tale told in prose. Love it
I loved the mystery of it all! It had such a wonderful dreamy quality as well. Nicely done :)
This was so magical and mesmerising! Such a beautifully written poem! I loved it!
A captivating, beautiful story told through poetry. Loved it!!
Well done
Very nicely done.
Naturally Atmospheric , loved it