I watched her grow like a flower
A petal floating in the wind
I stood a silent observer
To the loss of time
I don't think she could see me
I was just a fading image
~
In the dark abyss of unrequited love
Only fate remained, time telling a story
The ending unknown, the last page unread
A million possibilities, just out of reach
~
I waited for her to see me
Before time was lost
I listened to a quiet breeze
Blow silently through a
Corner of my soul
Telling me, my chance
Was already gone
~
I stood a passing reminder
To things left unsaid
Looking out beyond this place
I watched her on the horizon
A silhouette dancing
In the moonlight
Fate whispered in my ear
I would always be
As far
As I was
As far as the flower
From the sun
~
I traced a tear running
Cold from my cheek
I gave hope away
In bitter pieces of despair
I felt a tidal wave
Crashing against the shore
Of my empty heart,
A lonely goodbye
To a misplaced hello
~
I confessed love in words
I whispered into the abyss
my voice drifted
in the expanse
stretching
between us
I don't think she could hear me
I was just an invisible silence
~
I turned from her, knowing
I was forgotten
Before I was remembered
I passed from her cinema screen
A single frame of film, unseen
A flickering of flame, extinguished
Still, in the briefest of moments
I shared with her
A life unknown, forever undiscovered
A shadow in the distance
A petal floating in the wind
About the Creator
The Invisible Writer
"Poetry is what happens when nothing else can"
Charles Bukowski
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Comments (3)
This is absolutely beautiful, made me sad, made my heart ache. It is a lovely song, flower/love please hear the song.
I find myself heart broken and speechless in the wake of this beautifully devastating piece. I sit in bated breath as I read it several times over. Your word choices and use of metaphor is simply moving beyond measure. You did an amazing job portraying the raw emotions of the narrator! This was inspiring, TIW! 💜
So heartbreaking, so sad, so unheard. “my voice drifted in the expanse stretching between us” So beautiful