I saw it from a thousand years
I caught it’s breath inside my ears
I heard the splash of dewdrop tears
Fall down into the River
Old men watching in the black
(Their haggard faces gaptooth cracked);
Their hearts on tattered sleeves retract
Their bones begin to shiver
And as this winged beast came gently
Falling through the whisps of grey
The riverside based men of gentry
Clicked their tongues with much dismay
‘Here comes the thief of night
To steal all life away’
And softly as a heart could beat
Raised this beast the Earth to meet
His brown and fur of body resting twixt two wings like eyes
And loud and harsh as day could break
Ten thousand sets of eyes did wake
And from their concrete towers shouted ‘Death!’ with fearful cries
Twenty thousand footsteps down five thousand sets of stairs did clatter
As ten thousand tongues came wagging through the frosty air of dawn
‘Such a nasty, nightly creature
Only could have been a feature
Of the streets of hell, yes surely this is Satan’s spawn’
As I watched with bitten lip, sinking heart like river ship,
Heard them did I speaking of a legend once forewarned
All twenty thousand ears had heard, spoken as though truth were word,
Of a creature’s wings that with one stir could cause a storm
I watched each earthly father and each earthly mother gushing
Causing every earthly child in their arms begin to quake
And fear like hand was clutching at the hearts and therefore rushing
From the mouths and therefore causing all the atom air to shake
My hands were lifted from my sides, I couldn’t watch, I hid my eyes
As human hands and mouths and feet caused human earth to split
And with the earthly movement caused by movement only human
Came the one human conclusion that ‘the creature causeth it!’
Yet all the while sitting, was the creature,
Barely flitting,
With it’s heavy creature eyes and wings
Closed tightly as it slept
And all the while watching was I,
Through my fingers held to my eye,
With my heavy tongue to mouth, glued tightly as I wept
‘It isn’t wings from beast of hell or even beast of heaven’s dwell!”
I wished my muted lips to simply part and cry aloud
But in silence I stood viewing
All the earthly dwellers spewing
Forth as though themselves became a beast when as a crowd
Into the creature’s wings they thrust
Their fists, their knees, their feet, their busts
They tore the veins and bit the fur
and pierced the eyes with sticks
They cracked it’s skin and drank the blood,
Snapped bones and threw them in the mud
They held their children up to beat it’s skull with rocks and bricks
And slowly as they gorged and feasted
Sunlight rose and darkness shifted,
Each could see the blood and madness stark upon their brother’s face
But in the misty dawn of morning
Not a soul was close to dawning
Not a heart was near to mourning
Cruel humanity’s disgrace
Mothers hugged their children tight
Men shook hands and yelled ‘good fight!’
Lovers pressed their dripping torsos tightly breast to breast
And as each sat and barely moved
This new found stillness they said proved
That disaster had diffused
Now the beast been suppressed
But from afar I stood and cursed
As all the city folk dispersed
Disappearing into shelters for to wash and get undressed
And I knew that such a horror
Dwelt in father, child mother
That though this beast lay now in stillness
Never would it lay to rest
About the Creator
Rae Smith
intersex, trans, non binary creator with ADHD, OCD and CPTSD
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