money to retire
Superannuation
But you can't buy time
*
Above and beyond
Supererogatory
But not credited
*
Quicker than usual
Superinstantaneous
But undervalued
*
Lording over others
Superiority
But better, you're not
*
Like flies to dog shit
Superirresistible
But not always good
*
Better and faster
Superphenomenal
But lacks empathy
*
Easily worried
Supersensitivity
but with a good heart
*
Hard to put trust in
Superunbelievable
But worth it, when pure
*
Thank you for reading!
So yeah, another haiku-diversion from my WIP folder. I did get one of my WIPs out last night. But yes.
This is fairly self-explanatory. An octo-haiku made around the eight 7-syllable words beginning with super-.
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Paul Stewart
Scottish-Italian poet/writer from Glasgow.
Overflowing in English language torture and word abuse.
"Every man has a sane spot somewhere" R.L Stevenson
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A Hiatus Turned Reflection
No, I wasn't dead, nor fighting off some great mystical beast tyrannizing a group of villagers. To those who look forward to what I have to say, or to put it better, write, I am genuinely sorry for my disappearance from the Vocal platform and community.
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Comments (6)
How, in the name of everything that's holy, do you come up with brilliant ideas like this? You blew my mind!
This is great. Wordy, but not a lot of words. Very well done.
You keep impressing me with these poems and the ideas that they come from 😅 You have a great mind! Love this stuff!
A good poem with a good heart.
Ahh, the word nerd in me just loved this. Le sigh. Also, I was anticipating an octopus somewhere in this based on the title, no idea why, but there wasn't one, lol!!! Fabulous work!!
wow such super contrasting comparisons tres bien buddy, ❤️