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Breathe against the flame
Tears flood the ground with their salt
My soul is detoxed
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That is exactly what crying feels like
So beautiful. ❤️
This is so beautiful. I love the emotion and texture in this piece. I especially love the imagery that your language evokes. I loved your use of the combination of"tears," "salt" and "detox" in this.❤️ Beautiful!