Breathe against the flame
Tears flood the ground with their salt
My soul is detoxed
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Dana Stewart
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Saint Patrick's Blind Date
This is for the latest Vocal challenge that you can read about below. The limerick only clocks in at thirty words, but I hope it brings a smile to your face. I can't change the font or size in the Vocal editor so took a screenshot of my limerick as well
By Mike Singleton - Mikeydred4 days ago in Poets
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So beautiful. ❤️
This is so beautiful. I love the emotion and texture in this piece. I especially love the imagery that your language evokes. I loved your use of the combination of"tears," "salt" and "detox" in this.❤️ Beautiful!